Friday, 22 October 2010
Another Man
She was restless. A tear rolled down her eye.
He was clam.
'I know..' he said 'I am impotent' staring at his wife's protuding belly. He stretched out his hand to touch the foot impression of the child that was not his.
He was clam.
'I know..' he said 'I am impotent' staring at his wife's protuding belly. He stretched out his hand to touch the foot impression of the child that was not his.
She entered with a smile into the labor room.
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In:
55 Fiction
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Randomness Infinite
In:
55 Fiction
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Randomness Infinite
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5 Wisecracks (Comment here):
Nice one Richa. Although you could've put the 'I'm impotent' bit at the very end to preserve the element of shock.
Such emotionally charged short story! #awesome
Liked the plot, execution could have been slightly better.
i loved this piece..
@ Sam,
Thanks for your POV, yes, I could have. just, trying my hands on fiction. Also, Practice makes a man perfect :D
@ Adi,
Thanks :)
@ Writerzblock,
Thanks :)
@ How do we know,
Thanks :)
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