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Sunday, 18 April, 2010

Teenage Diaries- The Finale

Dear Diary,

Shock! This is what I would define this day. All these days have been no less than disturbing. With the arrival of Nitin Sahney came a Tsunami in my life that does not seem to clam down.
When Mumma told me he was not my father, I was kind of relieved. But now that I know who actually he is, I think I hate him more than anything.

15 years of my life. I have been blessed to have the best mother in the world. And today she comes and tells me that she is not my mother. Why? Why did she have to tell that to me?

I went into a state of shock when yesterday she told me that.
Nitin Sahney is the man responsible for bringing me to life. He impregnated my biological mother and fled off because he was not ready for a family. The biological mother too gave up on me when I was born to her best friend who wanted to bring me up and she did take care of me for 15 yrs until Mr. Sahney wanted his legacy back.
Mumma wants me to decide whether I wanted my biological father or her. I decide to stay with her because she is the one I have known to be my own all these years.

No person in the world, blood or marriage can make me give her up. That is because she decided to mother me when my own mother left me.

I love you Mumma.


TTYL Diary.
Love,
Rehmat



12 Wisecracks (Comment here):

ANWESA said...

A nice read.

Raises some pertinent questions in my mind.

яノςんム said...

:) anwesa :)

can u bring on the questions??

Aditya Nandode said...

I wonder if legal claim will stand, in absence of any legal documents pertaining to adoption, and whether court will listen to Child's choice in this case, this post treads on lot of real life unanswered Questions, Amazing post, makes one think!

sublimefeeling said...

intresting.. dunno if you coming up with more parts...
but by fars its gr8..!!

How do we know said...

i LOVED that ending!!

Neha Mehta said...
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Neha Mehta said...

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A big fan of urs..!!

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Dr. Sohrab Arora said...

beautiful short story. this work could get published if u try! well written!

яノςんム said...

thank you people :)

Maria said...

Interesting. and i loved the end. here could be no other logical end. Nice choice of words.

softylover said...

in the reactions tab add "loved it" coz i reaaly did... n so did most of us..