My Feeble Attempts at Fictions.
Thursday, 16 June, 2011

Full Moon

Dear Diary,
The full moon is amazingly beautiful. The cold breeze is complimenting the perfect weather. Her hair swagging around with the air has left me awestruck. She looks breath-takingly stunning tonight. I know why I love her so much. I know why she invited me for a night out at this abandoned hill. The way she is looking at me, I guess I am going to get lucky tonight. She has decided to be with me. Tonight, we'll lay together on the ground and watch the stars. I am going to tell her about constellations and she will be impressed. Her eyes look so enchanting, she might just as well hypnotize me. I am writing this down so that I can show her later that I am not just into her physical self, but her self as the person.

Bye for now, she needs my attention more than you.


This was the excerpt from the diary of the man found dead in the woods last night. The dairy was spotted by a policeman near his body. He has been identified as Vibhut Khurana, a leading industrialist of the town. The postmortem reports say that Mr. Khurana was killed by a wolf. Many chunks of skin from his body have been eaten. The question now is, if he was with a woman last night, where did the woman go? Does she know about the kill? Is she a witness? Did she flea away scared or was she too killed by the wolf? The hunch by the police is that the woman too, was dragged deep into the forest by the wolf and there could have been more than one wolves out there.


She pressed the button of the remote to switch the TV off and bit into chunk of Vibhut's skin.

16 Wisecracks (Comment here):

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

:D Hmm Yummieyyy hahaha

I can imagine her taking a chunk off his flesh.

Blasphemous Aesthete

Falaxy said...

Oh my! didn't see that coming!

Richa said...

@ BA,
:O You can imagine? That sounds eerie to me :P


Anonymous said...

Did she dip the chunk in ketchup? :D

Its good! :D

Punkster said...

Lovely twist in the end.

PS- Could we show wolves in a lighter shade. They're good yaar. Ask me no? :P

Stupidosaur said...

What a shoddy n wateful person. Shud've brought the whole body and put it in the refrigerator - no trace of crime and a whole week of TV watching without having to 'work' again.

Anwesa said...

Our own version of "Twilight"/"Vampire Diaries"/etc.

Liked the sting in the tale.

Aragorn said...

A short and sweet narration!! Though the climax was along expected lines, i didn't know wolves store the 'kill' and eat it at their homes... :P

To sum up, Impressively brief article with a twist...!


Richa said...

@ Nidhi,
Blood my friend works instead of Ketchup ;)

@ Punky,
Thanks :) arrey, that is ahybrid. wolf+human ;) werewolf kind of :P

@ Stupidosaur,
not a person, its somewhat super-natural types :P

@ Anwesa,
LOL. umm, not really.

@ Aragorn,
this wasn't storing. it was left overs from last night ;)
thanks :)

Zeba said...

Ayi! I sat up straighter and gave a start when I read the last bit. And I was just about to have lunch. I think I have lost me appetite for a while. But god, what a lovely piece. Well written.

Richa said...

Apologies for ruining your appetite. :D

Thanks a lot! :)

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Vishant Pachisia said...

I did not expect that kind of an end! Haha.
But you almost end up imagining yourself in the same situation. :P

Richa said...

@ Mr. Lonely, :)

@ Vishant,
haha. don't get yourself eaten.

Samadrita said...

The cons of falling in love with a may get eaten alive! :D great twist in the tale.

Richa said...

@ Samadrita,
:D thanks