My Feeble Attempts at Fictions.
Wednesday, 30 December, 2009

Reality Check

She hit him hard in the face.
All she felt was rage.
How shallow could he get.
What about the vow to stand by her side?

How could he tell her to kill his own daughter growing inside her womb?

P.S. Save the girl child.

9 Wisecracks (Comment here):

in soham nia said...

hey amazing 55 fiction post, love the revelation and the hidden message :) very poignant!

Aditya Nandode said...

Short and Hard hitting, and clear.

Defiant Princess said...

I like your blog at first sight girl!
and you're signing off font ;)

яノςんム said...

@ Soham,
thnx :)

яノςんム said...

@ Adi,
thnx :)

яノςんム said...

@ Defiant Princess,
thnx girl :) n welcome to the blog :)

Harshita said...

Really good... :)

Americanising Desi said...


ANWESA said...

poignant..yet strong.

i wish every woman were her..